Topic: UC.Sarah and Koto-NEEDS REDOING (Read 70 times)
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UC.Sarah and Koto-NEEDS REDOING « Thread Started on Nov 25, 2007, 4:34pm »
Name: Sarah Bakudan
Age: She looks about 5
Ranks: No rank
Gender: Female
Side: Don't care?..I think..she is a nice girl..but she has no clue
Job: shes a kid >W< so..none XD
Hometown: A small unknown town that isn't even big enough to be on a map.
Looks: (shes the little girl >W<)
Eye Color:Brown
Hair (color, style, length):Brown, Strait, Slightly past her shoulders.
Height: 3'2
Weight:65
Skin tone: Caucasian
Character Appearance: Sarah looks about 5. She has long brown hair that is strait and slightly past her shoulders and brown eyes. She is Caucasian. She weighs 65 Lb. and it 3'2 She wears a small pale pink shirt with black colored pants. She has marking on her proving that she is not really a human. She is rally a Homunculi. But she has no clue she is one.
Additional Features: The marking on her face and body were a result of her brother trying to bring her back.
Character Personality: This little girl is completely sweet in innocent. She has no clue about what had happened or the fact that she is not human anymore. she things she is human. and her brother did not explain to her what happened. She seems to be always happy and excited. but thats the normal thing for a little kid.
But, she is also overly trusting. she will trust anyone that really speaks to her kindly..and ever people that have been mean before..if there nice to her another time.. she is trusting. Because of that she is easily persuaded and tricked.
History: Sarah and Koto's Parents died when Sarah was only little, leaving koto when he was only about 16 to care for her. People did not believe that this such a thing was possible..and contently tried to get them into the care of another, but..the refusals of the young boy kept them from doing so. so..after two years. Sarah turned five..and koto started having trouble with financial things..as well as people that had knew there father from before.
One night, Sarah was walking home from going somewhere.. and the men who had been bothering koto in order to get money out of him..attacked her to get back at him...Koto found her laid on their doorstep.
Koto had become a state alchemist....but..he had to do sometihng..he went against his code and brought Sarah to the area he needed to...and made her into a Homunculi..loosing one of his eyes in the process. Koto then quit being a state alchemist so no one would suspect his sister was no longer herself..and moves around so people don't suspect anything.
Fears: Snakes, Loud noises, Large crowds of people
Likes: Candy. A small pink stuffed bunny she carries every where
Dislikes: Snakes, noises, crowds. she also hates people that have any kinda weapon normally.
Strengths: If she has enough room between people..she can try to attack more accurate. That and she can seem innocent...even though she is completely innocent
Weakness: She is easily tired. epically if she tried to use any kinda power. She is also easily tricked
Hobbies: Playing. she loves to mess around with her bunny stuffy and loves to draw
Preferred Weapons : without her knowing, she can make enough pressure in the ground that under an enemy the ground will explode.
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Name: Koto Bakudan
Age: 18
Title: Hes an Ex state alchemist.
Ranks: Ex state alchemist
Gender: Male
Side: Don't Care? he is really not on anyones side
Job: Hes a cashier at a general store >W<
Hometown:A small unknown town that Isn't even big enough to be on a map.
Looks: (hes the boy)
Eye Color: Blue
Hair: orangish brown, Strait, short
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 200 Lb.
Skin tone: Caucasian
Character Appearance: Koto is 18 and has short, strait, light brownish orange hair. He has striking blue eyes which is weird compared to his little sisters dark brown eyes. He is 6ft and weighs 200Lb. He is Caucasian.He wears a red vest with a blue shirt underneath and black pants with a belt. He always has bandages over his eyes or an eye patch.
Additional Features: he is missing a single eyes from turning his sister into a Homunculi.
Character Personality: Koto is serious and tough toward people he dose not know and he tends to be aggressive. Hes more aggressive toward people that suspect anything of his sister though. so he is not the nicest person to get along with at first. after a while and he starts to trust you.. he is much easier to get along with. But..once you get to know him he is really sweet.
Around Sarah he is very kind and nice. he dose not let her know anything had happened. He is also very protective and strict. He dose not let Sarah go off on her own ever. He tends to also have Sarah wrapped up in a blanket of carry her when they are out in a public like area. He dose not want anyone to suspect anything.
History: Sarah and Koto's Parents died when Sarah was only little, leaving koto when he was only about 16 to care for her. People did not believe that this such a thing was possible..and contently tried to get them into the care of another, but..the refusals of the young boy kept them from doing so. so..after two years. Sarah turned five..and koto started having trouble with financial things..as well as people that had knew there father from before.
One night, Sarah was walking home from going somewhere.. and the men who had been bothering koto in order to get money out of him..attacked her to get back at him...Koto found her laid on her doorstep.
Koto had become a state alchemist....but..he had to do sometihng..he went against his code and brought Sarah to the area he needed to...and made her into a Homunculi..loosing one of his eyes in the process. Koto then quit being a state alchemist so no one would suspect his sister was
Fears: People finding out what really happened with his sister.. .thats rally it
Likes: He likes to work. mess with a garden and taking care of his sister
Dislikes: Some people in the military,
Strengths: He is smart ..really smart, and cunning
Weakness: He can be frustrated or angry easy which causes him to not pay attention.
Hobbies: carving ans stone working. researching.
Preferred Weapons: none
-I want you to make SEPARATE PROFILES. no two-in-ones. It helps the site to make individual profiles. So, this is now not a AC, but a UC. Unaccepted character, and PLEASE use the sites real character sheet. Only Strife, my first member, had the right to do that because she couldn't remember her character. I want you to re-do both of these profiles or I will not allow you to RP anymore.
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Joined: Nov 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 52 Karma: 4
Re: Sarah and Koto « Reply #1 on Nov 25, 2007, 4:51pm »
hm, Sarah, its okay that you used the FMA stories profile sheet but next time you need to use this sites official one, okay? I'll let you off once because I let Strife use it. So, Accepted, but keep that in mind.
[on:EDWARD IZ IN ZE HIZZ-HOUSE MY HOMIES!][of:Currently looking for da Philosophers Stone]
Joined: Nov 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 52 Karma: 4
Re: Sarah and Koto « Reply #2 on Dec 7, 2007, 10:05am »
ehm. I have found a problem. I want you to make SEPERATE PROFILES. no two-in-ones. It helps the site to make indevidual profiles. So, this is now not a AC, but a UC. Unaccepted character, and PLEASE use the sites real character sheet. Only Strife, my first member, had the right to do that because she couldn't remember her character. I want you to re-do both of these profiles or I will not allow you to RP anymore. -DO NOT REPLY RUDELY UNLESS YOU WANT ANOTHER WARNING, WHICH IS A STEP CLOSER TO A BAN.-
[on:EDWARD IZ IN ZE HIZZ-HOUSE MY HOMIES!][of:Currently looking for da Philosophers Stone]
Joined: Nov 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 52 Karma: 4
Re: Sarah and Koto « Reply #3 on Dec 7, 2007, 10:07am »
ehm. I have found a problem. I want you to make SEPARATE PROFILES. no two-in-ones. It helps the site to make individual profiles. So, this is now not a AC, but a UC. Unaccepted character, and PLEASE use the sites real character sheet. Only Strife, my first member, had the right to do that because she couldn't remember her character. I want you to re-do both of these profiles or I will not allow you to RP anymore. -DO NOT REPLY RUDELY UNLESS YOU WANT ANOTHER WARNING, WHICH IS A STEP CLOSER TO A BAN.-